Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Sunday, September 29, 2013

Acostic Poems 'Spring'


Spring is here

Petals falling on the ground

Really little ducklings following their mother

It’s amazing, flowers are growing

Nest built be birds

Grass growing really quickly

By Parth

 

Sewing rain so it can fall upon my flowers

Precious lilies open in spring

Refreshing watermelon to eat

Indigo violets spread across the meadow

Nothing prettier than flowers blooming in spring

Growing delicately, daffodils and daisies

By Daisy

 

Spring is coming, winter is going

Pretty flowers are growing

Red rose buds bursting into flower

I like spring because flowers grow

Nice flowers make me smile

Green is my flower colour

By Brodie



 Seeds grow very quickly

Friends play games together

I jump, skip and hop outside In spring

Get outside In spring while it lasts

By Clara



Sun shining brightly

Powerful spring spreading all around

Rose buds, looking lovely

I planted some daffodils

Nothing is going to stop spring

Golden flowers smelling sweet

By Thomas



So many daisies bust out of the ground after winter

Pretty birds come out to fly

Rain helps the flowers grow

In the river the ducklings are swimming with their mother

No more leaves falling from the trees because it is spring

Growing blossoms on the tree

By Cindy



Spring has arrived so go out and play

Playing outside in the warm sun

Running around the playground

Imaginative children jumping for joy

Noisy birds chirping in the trees

Growing tulips with delicate petals

By Bailey
 
 

So many dandelions busting into bloom

Pretty flowers come and stay

Rose buds growing

I awake in spring and see lots of lovely fresh flowers

New daisies come out on the lawn and I make daisy chains

Green grass growing in spring

By Ruby
 
 

Sun shining brightly in the blue sky

Precious daisies cover the lawns

Rabbits come out to find food

In spring lots of baby animals are born

Now go outside and play

Go and play in the garden

By Ody
 
 

So many daffodils blooming in the sunshine

Pretty delicate little blossoms hanging on the trees

Really small animals finding food

Incredible little squirrels hiding in the trees

Nice little daffodils sitting in the sunshine

Great smells come from the blossoms

By Baxter
 
 

So many pretty daffodils in the gardens

Pretty fantails flying around in the blue sky

I wake up in the morning, spring is here

Now the bees are here looking for flowers

Go on kids, it’s time for games

By Nevaeh
 
 

Spring is twirling and blossom is blooming

Pretty flowers come out In the garden

Rose buds bust open

 Insects and bugs crawl carefully out of their homes

Native plants grow

Growing daffodils bloom in spring

By Lala

 

Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Cross Country Stories


Our stories about our experiences running the cross country.

At the start line……………

At the start line I felt like I was going to win. I could see people.  They were cheering for me.
By Parth

I came 5th in the cross country.  Ody  came  6th.  I pretended there was a tiger chasing me.  I heard most people cheering loudly for me.  I saw that I was coming 5th.  I felt I was running like a cheetah.
By Tim

At the start line I felt excited because I was going to run the cross country. I could see lots of people coming and I could see people cheering for me. 
By Benit

 I felt like I wanted to be first. I heard Mum and Dad cheering for me when I was running the cross country.  At the start of the race I felt I didn’t wasn’t to come last.  I tried my best to beat Thomas but I couldn’t beat Thomas.  He was too fast at the end. I finished the race and I didn’t come last.
By Adel

 At the start line I felt happy because I was going to go and run the cross country.  I was running as fast as I could go.
By Gemma

I felt like I was as fast as the wind at the start but I was also nervous too. I was faster than Thomas.  I heard cheering and shouting for me.  I felt great, I was trying my best. I heard my parents cheering and the other kids too.  It was amazing because I came second.  I got a medal.  It was fun. By Jongyoon

I felt full of energy at the start line. I was so happy because I wanted to be champion of all.  When I ran I felt like I was going to be 5th.  I could see my Dad and Mum and my Dad said “keep running’.  When I was at the finish line Parth tried to beat me, but I beat Parth.
By Iman

At the start line I was excited.  I had lots of energy.  I can see lots of adults and children cheering.  I can hear lots of cheering.
By Baxter

 I felt worried at the cross country because someone was in front of me but when I saw my brother cheer, I ran faster and I got a medal.  I saw people holding red flags so we know where to go.  I heard people cheering for me.  I felt really proud of myself.
By Lala

 
When the cross country happened I heard people cheering for me and Mr Harrison calling out.  I saw a goal post, hay bales and other children.  I felt happiness coming into my heart.  I could feel my heart getting happier and happier when my mum cheered for me.  When the cross country was over mum got a book.
By Clara

On cross country day I felt scared.  Daisy and I ran together but I came before Daisy and we sat together. At the end of my race I stayed with my Mum and brother and friend and sister.
By Nevaeh

At the start line I felt excited because I was hoping to win the cross country. I heard people cheering for me.  I saw my brother.  I felt a hand on my back. 
By Brodie

A the start line I felt excited because I was hoping to win, but I didn’t win.  I felt worried at the cross country because someone was in front of me but when my sister cheered I ran faster.  When I crossed the finishing line I was really tired.  My mum clapped for me.  My mum was proud.
By Ruby

 
When I had got to the cross country I felt like I was going to win.  It looked easy.  I felt like a bear in a race. “On your mark!  Go!” shouted Mr Harrison.  I ran very fast but not as fast as my friends.  I ran faster, faster and faster but I tripped. I saw my friends run past.  I heard my mummy yelling “go Daisy go, go, go Daisy go.”  I ran to the hay bales.  I felt worried and happy.  “Mum” I said before I finished “Thomas won”.

By Daisy

Monday, May 6, 2013

Adventure Stories Written by Room 10 Students

Once a mouse called Mars was going to space.  He was excited.  Mars invited his friends, Jupiter and Pluto.  They built a rocket ship that had three seats.  They blasted off to space.  But they got stuck in the Milky Way because there were lots of meteors.  Then Mars had an idea.  He got out of the space ship and swung his tail over and under a thousand times around the Milky Way………………………
This exciting story continues in Clara’s writing book.
A boy called Zack built a rocket ship.  It was a very special rocket ship.  He loved it. He wanted to go to the moon.
By Parth
One day a boy called Zack was building a rocket ship.  He wanted to fly to the moon.  He wants to get some cash to buy a ladder to climb up to the moon.  On the way Zack saw an alien flying to his home.  Zack was flying home and lives happily ever after.
By Cindy
 Once upon a time there was a dog called Rose who had lots of friends.  They find treasure in a rainbow house and it was pirates treasure and they stole it from the rainbow house.  The treasure was gold and silver and bronze.  There were teddy bears and silver coins.
By India-Rose
One day a boy called Zack made a rocket ship.  He likes to go to space. It was fun to walk on the moon.  Zack could walk on the moon and he could jump high. He will fly back to earth.
By Gemma
The alien’s rocket ship is flying to the moon and the boy sees an alien.  He was happy.  The alien said to the boy.  “My rocket ship has no petrol.”  The boy parachuted back to earth.  He got a ladder and goes up to the moon and puts petrol to fill up the alien’s rocket ship.  The alien flew away.
By Benit
Bob the Dog needs to go to Venus so he built a rocket.  Then he flew to Venus. On Venus he saw an alien.  He is flying around the planet.  They fly together all the way back home.  By Baxter
Once there was a dog named Bingo.  He was very clever.  He invented a machine that could fly.  It was very cool.  He used its buttons and took off the ground into space.  His jet pack ran out of fire and he fell onto the moon.  An aliens ship landed on the moon too, it was broken.  They thought they could cooperate and the alien flew back home and then the dog flew back home. 
BY Bailey
Once upon a time there was a girl called Alice.  She was an explorer.  She walked into a jungle.  She found a boy who was lost.  They explored together.  They found treasure in a damp box.  On the way back they was a huge bog.  It was very, very big.  A big huge hand whipped out of the bog.  The fingers were like needles.  The hand grabbed Alice…………
Read the rest of this exciting story in Daisy’s book
 
Once there was a very clever dog called Rex.  He was a secret spy.  He could build a tower or a jet plane.  He is sneaky and he’s likes to build gadgets and machines.
Rex thought of something exciting to make. Rex grabbed his toolbox out of the shed.  He put the toolbox on the bench and he built a jet plane. It had an invisible shield so meteors won’t damage the jet plane.  After seven days the jet plane was ready to go to space.
Follow Rex’s adventures by reading the rest of the story in Adel’s book.
 
Once there lived a mine craft person called Steve.  Steve was a good builder and he built machines and a mine craft power spy jet.  One day he flew to Mars with his dog Zack.  When Steve and Zack arrived on Mars they saw a zombie called Rex.  Rex’s zombie ship had broken down because he hadn’t any oil.  Steve and his dog got an idea. Steve got out his parachute from his mine craft power spy jet.
Read the rest of Iman’s story in his book.
 
 
 
Once there lived a zombie called Bailey and he was 100 years old.  One day Bailey travelled to Venus to find friends.  But he doesn’t so he travels to Mars. He looks and looks.  He looks on the bottom and on the top but he couldn’t find friends.  So he looks on the sides and Bailey finds friends.  They are called Jongyoon, Tim and Brodie.
By Brodie
 
Once there lived a dog called Meme.  She had fluffy ears. She had a cat that had a sad face and her name was Clara.  She had a rabbit called Rose who had a pink body and a horse who had funny legs.
One day the pets wanted to find some treasure and explore the world. The three friends found a rainbow castle. In the castle there was a wicked witch.  One day the weird evil witch put the pets in a dungeon………..
Find out what happens by reading the rest of the story in Ruby’s book.
 
One day there was a cat called Chip.  Chip loves to have adventures in the dark wood because she is an adventure cat.  Chip bought a parachute from a shop called ‘Everything’.  Chip floated down to the dark woods with a parachute.  She saw a big log sitting near the big brown tree. Chip cannot jump high but she can go through the log because she is small.  It is nearly night and Chip had to get another parachute, but she can’t get another one so she walked back to her pink home. When Chip got home she was happy, but very tired.
By Lala
 
 
 
Once there was a soccer player called Sam.  He made a huge massive rocket plane.  He blasted off to the blue planet Mars with his cat and dog.  His cat was scared of the darkness.  Sam landed in the middle of Mars.  Bump! “Hello”.  “Who said that?”  “Over here.”  “Oh hi, what do you want?” said Sam.  “My ship’s broken” said a friendly alien.  “Do you have a parachute?”  “Yes”.  Weeee, he floats down to his home.  He has a lot of tools.  He gets a ladder and pulls the top bit and climbs up.  He fixes the alien’s ship.  He blasts back to his house.  He forgot to put away his huge ladder, so he breaks the ladder down and puts it against a big tree.
By Jongyoon
Once there was a little six year old and his name was Paynee and he was an astronaut.  He liked inventing rockets that could fly.  So on Saturday he built a rocket.  It flew 100 metres. He saw a 6 metre alien.  Boom, crash, bash!  “What was that?” said Paynee.  It was the alien, his ship had broken down. Paynees ladder was also broken because it had fallen down on a hard rock.  A diplodocus made his way through the forest.  He saw Paynee and the alien.  He stretched his neck until it came up to them.  He said to Paynee “Climb down my neck”.
Find out what happens by reading the rest of the story in Tim’s book.
 
Once upon a time there lived Mickey Mouse and Mini Mouse, Goofy and Donald Duck.  They liked to go on adventures.  One day they landed in a place called Rainbow Avenue.  It was called Rainbow Avenue because everything was different colours.
Find out what happens in Rainbow Avenue by reading the rest of the story in Nevaeh’s book.
 
Once upon a time there was a wizard who teleported to Mars.  He saw an alien pass by in his UFO.  The alien crashed into a meteor and landed on Mars. The wizard saw the alien and with his wizard wand he magically fixes his UFO. It was hard because his wand ran out of power. So he dashed away…………
Find out if the wizard gets his power back by reading the story in Thomas’s book.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 
 


 
 
 
 
 
















 
 
 
 
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Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Poems by Fabulous Writers

 
 
 
The Fabulous Writers have written wonderful poems about 'Remembering the Duathlon'.
 

Tuesday, February 19, 2013

Writing from the Super Writers

We have been practising using adjectives in our writing.  We have highlighted the adjectives we have used.